Sunday, 20 January 2019

It’s All in the Name - SLJ

WEEK 2 DAY 4 ACTIVITY 2

NAMES

*Murky pool
Fog pool
lake pool
Dew pool
Green pool


5 comments:

  1. Hello Richie,
    WOW, I really like those names! I think you are very creative with them. I personally like murky pool, because it looks like a ridiculous lake. In this activity, you were meant to only choose 1 of your favourites because you might be the one changing the name. I think you are capable of writing about the devils bath and putting a picture in as well.

    What is your favourite colour?

    Happy Blogging
    Gargee HPS
    hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz

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    1. HI, Gargee

      Thanks for the comment, I will be sure to change the mistakes in my work.

      Thanks
      Richie

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  2. Hello Richie

    I love your silly pool names but what she said you need to choose only 1 pool.

    But i like those names that you made you must mbe an creative boy to make up names. But keep doing the good work!!!.

    Cheers - Mathew

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    1. Hi Mathew

      Thanks for the comment. Yes I have changed my mistakes. I will be careful about what i do to my work.

      Thanks
      Richie

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  3. Hi Richie!

    Thanks for sharing your new names for the Devils Bath. :)
    I like that you have taken the description of the bath "It is a neon green pool of stinky water." and used it to inspire some new names!

    I think Murky Pool is a pretty great choice for a favourite - Is there a reason you picked that one over the others?

    Have you been to Rotorua fo a visit before Richie?
    The geothermal pools and geysers are pretty awesome if you get the chance to visit!

    Great work Richie!

    Nga mihi,
    Ellee :)

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