Hello Richie, WOW, I really like those names! I think you are very creative with them. I personally like murky pool, because it looks like a ridiculous lake. In this activity, you were meant to only choose 1 of your favourites because you might be the one changing the name. I think you are capable of writing about the devils bath and putting a picture in as well.
Thanks for sharing your new names for the Devils Bath. :) I like that you have taken the description of the bath "It is a neon green pool of stinky water." and used it to inspire some new names!
I think Murky Pool is a pretty great choice for a favourite - Is there a reason you picked that one over the others?
Have you been to Rotorua fo a visit before Richie? The geothermal pools and geysers are pretty awesome if you get the chance to visit!
Hello Richie,
ReplyDeleteWOW, I really like those names! I think you are very creative with them. I personally like murky pool, because it looks like a ridiculous lake. In this activity, you were meant to only choose 1 of your favourites because you might be the one changing the name. I think you are capable of writing about the devils bath and putting a picture in as well.
What is your favourite colour?
Happy Blogging
Gargee HPS
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HI, Gargee
DeleteThanks for the comment, I will be sure to change the mistakes in my work.
Thanks
Richie
Hello Richie
ReplyDeleteI love your silly pool names but what she said you need to choose only 1 pool.
But i like those names that you made you must mbe an creative boy to make up names. But keep doing the good work!!!.
Cheers - Mathew
Hi Mathew
DeleteThanks for the comment. Yes I have changed my mistakes. I will be careful about what i do to my work.
Thanks
Richie
Hi Richie!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your new names for the Devils Bath. :)
I like that you have taken the description of the bath "It is a neon green pool of stinky water." and used it to inspire some new names!
I think Murky Pool is a pretty great choice for a favourite - Is there a reason you picked that one over the others?
Have you been to Rotorua fo a visit before Richie?
The geothermal pools and geysers are pretty awesome if you get the chance to visit!
Great work Richie!
Nga mihi,
Ellee :)