Kia Ora Richie, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
Tauke! Awesome! Thank you for taking part in the “Rise up” activity and for sharing your chorus on your blog post. I think that you have done an awesome job at emphasizing the act that you have to work hard to get to the top, which may look different to everyone.
Next time you post on your blog you might want to think about how you could introduce it. This may look like explaining what it is you are posting about or what activity you have chosen to do, that way people who come across your awesome posts are aware of what you're posting about. What do you think about that?
Keep up the mahi! I look forward to your response in the comment section below.
Kia Ora Richie, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteTauke! Awesome! Thank you for taking part in the “Rise up” activity and for sharing your chorus on your blog post. I think that you have done an awesome job at emphasizing the act that you have to work hard to get to the top, which may look different to everyone.
Next time you post on your blog you might want to think about how you could introduce it. This may look like explaining what it is you are posting about or what activity you have chosen to do, that way people who come across your awesome posts are aware of what you're posting about. What do you think about that?
Keep up the mahi! I look forward to your response in the comment section below.
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino