The Break In
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK, it was 1 am, my 2 sisters and I were home alone
because our parents were on a business trip out of the country.
We first thought it was our parent's home early but then we saw
somebody or something dressed in black from his head to his toes.
All of a sudden we hear someone breaking in from the back door.
because our parents were on a business trip out of the country.
We first thought it was our parent's home early but then we saw
somebody or something dressed in black from his head to his toes.
All of a sudden we hear someone breaking in from the back door.
We quickly but quietly ran upstairs and went into our parent's room
because it was the only room with a door that could lock and had a
cellphone. My sister Janie quickly found the phone and dialed 111.
The operator told my sister to stay on the phone and hide, so we
went to the toilet and locked the door.
because it was the only room with a door that could lock and had a
cellphone. My sister Janie quickly found the phone and dialed 111.
The operator told my sister to stay on the phone and hide, so we
went to the toilet and locked the door.
It was so quiet that it was like nobody had ever been to our house except
us. We decided that we would go out to check if they had left, we
completely ignored the operator telling us to just wait for the police.
We slowly opened the door and as we were opening the door it was forced
open by someone, it was the robbers not one but three, they knocked us all
out and put us in the back of their car.
us. We decided that we would go out to check if they had left, we
completely ignored the operator telling us to just wait for the police.
We slowly opened the door and as we were opening the door it was forced
open by someone, it was the robbers not one but three, they knocked us all
out and put us in the back of their car.
We soon woke up and heard sirens behind us; it was the cops following us at
high speed. The chase had gone on for at least 45 minutes before the car
ran out of fuel. We were safely returned to our homes with our parents
waiting, it turns out that the people that took us were wanted by the police.
high speed. The chase had gone on for at least 45 minutes before the car
ran out of fuel. We were safely returned to our homes with our parents
waiting, it turns out that the people that took us were wanted by the police.
From that day on we were never left at home alone and if our parents had a
business trip they would take us with them.
business trip they would take us with them.
HI Richie
ReplyDeletethat's one the best story ever I like the part when you said they knocked us all out and put us in the back of their car. keep up the good work
Hello Richie,
ReplyDeleteNice story you have here. It's really outstanding and interesting. Keep up the awesome work and keep blogging. Stay safe !!
Hey Richie,
ReplyDeleteGood story teller you are. This is very very interesting. Keep up with the amazing story telling and blogging. Stay safe !!
Great story Richie. I like the way the story turned out in the end. You have used some good words, and tried some different sentence structures - great job!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Richie This is Arli from Grey Main school this is one great entertaining story i like how you used the right punctuation and described the robbers dressed in black head to toe.
ReplyDeletegreat work Richie keep it up
Awesome story Richie,
ReplyDeletethe story's very nice and scary, how did you come up writing this story?
Stay safe
Hey Richie, Great work out standing story its cool because its like a thriller, people love stories because its like its happened but it hasn't other than that stay safe Richie!!!
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