Were about to hit the atmosphere
I really feel like drinking ginger beer
Were about to suit up and put on the head gear
Then suddenly I feel like a dead deer
We jump out to plant the flag
Then I start to lag
Then we hopped back in the spacecraft
and left the white flag
That was our trip to the moon
GOD DAMM!!
Hi Richie this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHI Heather
DeleteThanks for the comment and YES I would love to walk on the moon. Thanks for the advise I really appreciate it.
Richie
Hey Richie!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity!I liked how you made the words from your poem rhyme and how you wrote "GOD DAMM!" at the end!. What does being a dead deer feel like?
Keep up the great work!
Siosaia
Good work Richie I love your poem it is very cool I like how you said you felt like drinking a ginger beer. That is one of my favorite drink. Good work again, keep it up Richie
ReplyDeleteHi Richie,
ReplyDeleteI found it interesting that you planted the flag, and then started to lag. I also liked how you said that it felt like you were drinking ginger beer, do you like ginger beer?